Bob, first let me start by saying you actually ARE getting better, which i didn't ever think would happen... but i noticed you use the exact same drum pattern in every rnb beat... why? is that the only one you know? and why are your beats getting shorter??? I'm sorry, I gotta take off points in arrangement as there virtually is no arrangement... like nobody is gonna write a song to 35 seconds worth of music, unless it's meant to be an interlude? idk... but anyway EL you killed this... love the lead.. my only critique is watch that kick... you were dangerously close to making it TOO busy.. but you got got this.
Edited 04-19-2025 10:34 AM
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3I love that lead synth EL, very nice.
Bob, first let me start by saying you actually ARE getting better, which i didn't ever think would happen... but i noticed you use the exact same drum pattern in every rnb beat... why? is that the only one you know? and why are your beats getting shorter??? I'm sorry, I gotta take off points in arrangement as there virtually is no arrangement... like nobody is gonna write a song to 35 seconds worth of music, unless it's meant to be an interlude? idk... but anyway EL you killed this... love the lead.. my only critique is watch that kick... you were dangerously close to making it TOO busy.. but you got got this.
Edited 04-19-2025 10:34 AM
very 808s synth vibes dope bob.. but elfree landed the genre very well.. got el on this one.. good work guys GL fellas 🫡
Edited 04-17-2025 20:29 PM